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The Final Act

I loved you,
I hated you and everything in between
I lied to you, but still remained true
I showed emotions you've never seen

I died in your eyes,
As i died in my own
I couldn't win first prize
And I always should have known

I searched for your face,
Wasted all of my time
Tried to keep up with your pace,
Spent all but a dime

All of the sudden it hit me in the head,
I shouldn't love a boy who walked out my door
I found the strength to get up and said,
"You know what? I can't do this anymore."

I said, my show must go on,
Your act ended now.
I can't believe you were on for so long,
Leave. Hurry and just take a bow.

My final act is with you out of my sight,
The way it should always be.
Out of the darkness and into the light,
Ends the story of you without me.

by jaybayybayy808
posted on 10/20/2009

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Comment by Babigurlbroken: Oct 20, 2009 6:39 pm
WHY THE HELL ISN'T THIS VOTED UP TO THE TOP??? I FUCKING love it. Absolutely Jaw-Dropping amazing!!!!!
Comment by scarredemotions17: Oct 20, 2009 8:37 am
that was amazing. i loved it.
Comment by candygurl454: Oct 20, 2009 8:39 am
Great! i love it! keep writing!!
Comment by GreshamGirl09: Oct 20, 2009 8:59 am
that was really good... i liked it a lot
Comment by Alexanne: Oct 20, 2009 6:40 am
wow this is really good.
Comment by spicysalsa1: Dec 15, 2009 11:28 pm
Oh wow!!Its like you reached in me and pulled out my past year and a half and wrote it down!! I can so relate!!!
Comment by spicysalsa1: Dec 15, 2009 11:29 pm
Oh and it is wonderful lolSmiley Smiley
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