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The Broken

I know how the broken feel
When they tell you they've lost their world
I know what its like to have
A broken heart you cannot mend
I know how the broken feel.

I know what its like to cry
To watch a million lies before your eyes
To lose all trust
Never gaining it back
I know what its like to cry.

I know what its like to see
The one you love say good-bye
Not coming home
Even when you wish they would
I know what its like to see.

I know what its like to pretend
Acting like there's always a grin
When indeed you know there's not
You feel like your hearts been shot
I know what its like to pretend.

by beautifulxhjfxdisaster
posted on 05/02/2008

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Comment by Smitty: May 2, 2008 7:28 pm
amazing man..lovin it quite a bit..keep writing n rock on!
Comment by Darryn732: May 6, 2008 12:58 am
wow great poem
Comment by AngelicallyBroken: May 4, 2008 11:40 am
amazing!im sure you'll get a very good grade with this one,if i was your teacher i'd give you an A+++!haha great job.
Comment by tobeloved: May 2, 2008 3:50 pm
very good poem! you put lots of emotion in it! well done!
Comment by EmoBabyGurL: May 3, 2008 4:38 pm
Very well written. I love it. I can also relate to it. Sadd. But very well done. I love it.

<3...Kanna
Comment by Nelliii: May 3, 2008 1:55 pm
This poem is great, so much feeling in it...
Comment by Nelliii: May 3, 2008 1:54 pm
This poem is great, so much feeling in it...
Comment by kaylasheray: May 2, 2008 7:12 am
you feel like your hearts been shot..
i like it Smiley
Comment by AFireInYourEyes18: May 2, 2008 8:06 am
yeah it is a good poem... i know what that feels like but not at the moment and i hope you don't either Smiley
Comment by NotResponsible: May 2, 2008 9:14 am
Like it very much. I am embarassed by how much I now know about the composer. Embarassed and sad.
Comment by NotResponsible: May 2, 2008 9:21 am
I would like to post my poem but this dumass site sez I can't because I don't have any points. (points)

Because I hate stupid restrictions, I would like to post it in my comment. Beautifulasdfhjkljhasdfhsdflasdjfsahdfsdfsad if you have any comments I appreciate your critique. It be about loneliness too:

The Speed of Sound

I would like to get together with you
but by the Time you hear these words
I will already have moved on
Comment by NotResponsible: May 2, 2008 9:42 am
I would like to post my poem but this dumass site sez I can't because I don't have any points. (points)

Because I hate stupid restrictions, I would like to post it in my comment. Beautifulasdfhjkljhasdfhsdflasdjfsahdfsdfsad if you have any comments I appreciate your critique. It be about loneliness too:

The Speed of Sound

I would like to get together with you
but by the Time you hear these words
I will already have moved on
Comment by NotResponsible: May 2, 2008 10:01 am
I would like to post my poem but this dumass site sez I can't because I don't have any points. (points)

Because I hate stupid restrictions, I would like to post it in my comment. Beautifulasdfhjkljhasdfhsdflasdjfsahdfsdfsad if you have any comments I appreciate your critique. It be about loneliness too:

The Speed of Sound

I would like to get together with you
but by the Time you hear these words
I will already have moved on
Comment by NotResponsible: May 2, 2008 10:02 am
I would like to post my poem but this dumass site sez I can't because I don't have any points. (points)

Because I hate stupid restrictions, I would like to post it in my comment. Beautifulasdfhjkljhasdfhsdflasdjfsahdfsdfsad if you have any comments I appreciate your critique. It be about loneliness too:

The Speed of Sound

I would like to get together with you
but by the Time you hear these words
I will already have moved on
Comment by asdfyz: May 2, 2008 10:08 am
cool poem... You wrote tha for school? I'd save something that good for myself and POQ, not waste it on a stupid school project.
Comment by emsue11392: May 2, 2008 10:12 am
This Is amasing!!!!
seriously!!!!
Go comment mine please!!!!
Comment by NotResponsible: May 2, 2008 11:01 am
FYI, I didn't intentionally post 5 times. I think there is a problem with this forum app (I am a web application developer).

You crush Beautifuldfglkjdgsdhdlsfkgjdfgdlkgjdfkgljdfglkdjg.
Comment by lost_girl15: May 2, 2008 11:31 am
i love it this has so much enotion! keep writing
Comment by emogothjen: May 2, 2008 12:36 pm
wow!!! i love it and i know how you feel. great poem.
Comment by Breanna: May 13, 2008 7:22 am
omg this poem is grate i really get it
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