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The Beat Of A Lovers Heart

A loud explosion rippled through the air
filling the dark alley with the scent of gunpowder
the eyes just moments ago filled with fear
now stripped of color by the choking grip of death

A man across from the body
trembling as he realizes the horrid act he has
committed
and then a new fear fills his heart
the image of the one he loves flashes in his eyes

standing there frozen
only a few words able to escape
like a whisper of the wind
“What have I done?”

The fear in his heart growing
the sound of police sirens slicing through the air
cars coming to a screeching halt
the clicking of the shackles sealing his fate

Kneeling in a courtyard
trapped by the silence of death
with the darkness of depression
facing a firing squad

even facing death
his heart beats wild
racing to find its obsession
his love

“Ready!”
his head rising only to see his blindfold
“Aim!”
his heart racing faster

The image of his lover showing through to his last
blinded moments
the last beat of his heart hurting more than the rest
his last breath giving birth to two final words
“Forgive me.”

“Fire!”

by pillowfangs
posted on 05/08/2008

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Comment by MsKeys1707: May 8, 2008 8:56 am
omg this is amazing
it is screaming with emotion
This is one of the deepest poems I've read in a while
Keep writing and take care
Comment by drkromance: May 8, 2008 6:24 am
WOW.. very deep!
Comment by Waterblaze3234: May 8, 2008 7:19 am
whoa that was awesome i love it... still its so sad! but beautiful that inside everyone there is still that one...
Comment by mariana: May 8, 2008 8:47 am
wow... it's deep, and complex, because there seem to be more then what meets the eye with this one... it's wtitten well, and has a nice flow. good work.
Comment by LoveTheFreeWorld: May 9, 2008 7:17 pm
amazing. i really love the ending.
Comment by Lover26: May 8, 2008 3:00 pm
Wow thats was veryy good i hope i can become that good.
Comment by TheDesired: May 8, 2008 4:57 pm
Good! Smiley
Comment by kittenlover511: May 8, 2008 9:04 pm
really deep and amazing i really like it
Comment by Darryn732: May 9, 2008 9:45 am
This is amazing, I love itSmiley
Comment by babylove: May 9, 2008 10:53 am
this is an amazing poem....
it makes me think a lot about other people and what they must be going through... i love it...
<3, Hailey
Comment by lindseymarie: May 9, 2008 11:02 am
this is an omg poem..
it's predictible, but very good
Comment by loveforeverlivelonger: May 10, 2008 7:41 pm
good poem i love it
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