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Temptation.

Tears shed. Scared. Frightened. Darkness has returned. Past issues she's run from are back to haunt her.

No where else to turn. No razor in sight. No friends near.
Dealers walk the halls. Popping pills in the day. No one will notice.

Relaxation fills through her. No stress or worries. Lasts a couple of hours.
Then pain reveals itself. Stronger then before. Holding in the tears the final bell rings.

Home at last, where her only friend is, only he's not home.
She can't hold it any longer.
Temptation urges her. The razor is what she chose.
The rest is history.

by darknessveils15
posted on 11/15/2009

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Comment by UmbraMonumentum: Nov 15, 2009 10:42 am
Oh my. This poem smells of internal disaster, are you ok?
Comment by chiwa: Nov 16, 2009 10:53 am
Very good.
Comment by ErinLyric: Nov 15, 2009 4:33 pm
I love how you close it
Comment by ShellbieSmartt: Nov 18, 2009 9:43 am
WOW ITS LIKE WOW
Comment by aharmer: Nov 19, 2009 12:20 am
very powerful
Comment by KillCourtney: Nov 15, 2009 7:37 pm
Deep.
I love it.
You have talent
Comment by KAS: Nov 16, 2009 3:23 pm
Thats Insane!
Comment by HeartbrokenEmo: Nov 16, 2009 4:21 pm
Its Deep, powerful.. cool stuffs!
Comment by Atavist: Nov 17, 2009 5:26 am
This actually, despite the inherent talent, is scary and painful to read if you have any shred of humanity within you.As dark as it gets.
Comment by Elizajh: Nov 17, 2009 9:06 am
this poem was slightly disturbing...but i'm not so sure that it was because you were spelling the story out in such a way, or the fact that this is the real internal issues which people go through every day. nice work though.
Comment by PurpleApples: Nov 17, 2009 9:31 am
Disturbingly close to the bone on so many issues.

Brilliantly creative
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