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Tears

My tears of pain fall upon dead eyes
Visions of memories scream in my head
Waiting and wanting to die
Each memory more painful then the last
Your innocence taken by death
Watching as you scream in pain
Holding your hand as your eyes glaze over
Crying as your breath goes still.

by BlackRoseMaiden
posted on 02/23/2007

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Comment by UsedByYou: Feb 23, 2007 10:15 am
yeh i love it!
Comment by Rhona2134: Feb 23, 2007 11:18 am
I don't submit a comment to people who can't write a good poem ;]
Comment by InMyDreams: Feb 23, 2007 11:46 am
very sad and emotional.. but.. perfectly said.. i LOVE it lotz <3
Comment by controlthedemon: Feb 24, 2007 12:33 pm
its great

"Each memory more painful then the last
Your innocence taken by death
Watching as you scream in pain"

i like this part!!

keep it up,
your a great writer!?!


Comment by MechanicalAnimal: May 10, 2007 6:37 am
Cool.
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