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take me back

this isn't the first time
and i know it isn’t gonna be the last
I see how your looking at her
hows shes looking at you to

And it hurts like hell
Its so messed up
I gave you everything
Every fucking thing

I held you loved you
You meant the world to me
No the universe
This isn’t fair

We were so right and…
And well now it’s the end
It just so unfair I didn’t lie
I didn’t cheat

How could you look me in the eye and….
LIE… but I cant help but want to see you
Whats wrong with me
Fuck it will you take me back?

by cutiepie
posted on 11/21/2008

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Comment by hiddeninblood: Nov 21, 2008 1:03 pm
well..this is most defienitly depressing..
but overall the words invoke
you with a waterfall of emo-tions..

good poemSticking tongue out
Comment by XfroggieluverX: Nov 21, 2008 1:16 pm
this is really sad=[[
Comment by friendZdogZ: Nov 21, 2008 2:56 pm
depressing. he hurts u and u want him to take u back? honestly no hard feelings but are u mental? screw him and the bitch, forget it and move on.
btw the poem's great
Comment by darksideofme: Nov 22, 2008 11:26 am
Wow this poem confused me!!! I can't imagine how bad it is for you right now.
Comment by ZackeryDaley: Nov 25, 2008 10:58 am
It's ok baby gurl. I'll make it better
Comment by BloodLustingElf: Nov 26, 2008 8:18 am
great poem, very good job
Comment by xcrabsxrxnotxfoodx: Dec 2, 2008 7:35 am
i agree with hiddeninblood this is depressing and also with darksideofme i really cant imagine what your going through right now but...this is a really good poem
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