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Sunshone

The depths of blackness even blue and untrue.
The denseness of everything packed tight seeming nothingness.
Spirals of night looking for a hint found not a moon.
Nothing to be found, not lost, not present.
Existing below minimalism with no rational definition.
Where is the self when not accounted for within another?
How can one be here and there at the same time?
When will the center emerge?
As material as one is, material will not suffice!
Material is every thing and yet never enough.
Electric bright needs so much.
Electric material can exist on next to nothing,
so why has choice brought forward such nonsense?
Why has choice allowed to such exist?
Exist is what?
Exist I do...

by oldman
posted on 07/07/2007

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Comment by oldman: Jul 7, 2007 9:52 pm
reposted as others will follow.
Comment by missingmom: Jul 9, 2007 8:54 pm
Interesting!It reminds me of something my mom used to ponder, she called it, the illusion of reality. I'm going to have to ponder on this one some more...
Thanks for sharing it, looking forward to more, your postings are always so thought provoking! Smiley
Comment by Whitephoenix: Jul 23, 2007 2:36 am
Manga has Bleach-ed my brain. (Excuse bad pun)

I really don't get this...
Comment by DeVdoll343: Aug 22, 2007 7:48 pm
Wow. This is absolutly profound and amazing. I feel honared to be reading your work. Fantastic. I'm left in a chasm of wonder.
Comment by missingmom: Mar 10, 2008 11:05 am
Hi Robert, re-reading this, I'm in a position at the moment to understand this one better, not really a good place I might say, unfortunatly, most of us are just existing, I hope to change that soon. Love to hear more from you. Smiley
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