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Sunny Daz

On bright sunny daz
I go out side
I lift up my hands
to sheid my eyes

The hot sun shines
on me,as I look
at my skin I see
it turn red,and in
a few days I will
start to shed.

All of a sudden I
feel trickels of
of sweat go down
my head,I take the
back of my sleave
and wipe it away.

Sunny daz are
so hot but it
is the best
time of the year!!


by 18girl101
posted on 04/09/2008

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Comment by HeartlessAngel: Apr 9, 2008 11:18 am
well what you've got so far is pretty good.
Comment by truckergirl13: Apr 15, 2008 3:53 pm
Good so far Smiley

except on ur last line i think you meant "wipe it away"
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