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suicidal song

no one seems to understand her
i dont think her parents even planned her
and eveywhere she goes she feels rejected
micommunication is always expected

she's crying for direction
cant find her own reflection
all the while she's pretending
she's trying not to show it ,but everyone knows it
something is just killing her deep inside

pain is whats there
scars is what they see
the blood ours from her wrist the blade against her wrist is her
soultion ,her soulution to her pain she feels
maybe someday ,someday soon when she's alone
she'll decide to take her life
lying on the ground beside her gun

its too late ,its too late now to make her see
what see can really be
she's not alone
she's not the only one
all she needed was a voice
telling her she could make another choice
its too late ,its too late now
she's gone forever
she forever sleeps ......

by AshleyDawn
posted on 07/20/2008

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Comment by MonsterBabies: Jul 22, 2008 11:33 am
I like it good job.
Comment by deadrose37: Jul 24, 2008 10:27 am
I really like this one. Just a suggestion, break up your lines better and put a lil more dramatic emotion into it. Just a suggestion. NOt trying to be mean or trying to slap you in the back or any other thing you can think of. Anyways I love, just a few tips to improve it...
Comment by LongxLost: Nov 9, 2008 8:44 am
Good job
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