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Still Memories

Remember the time we were at the shop of toys?
We laughed, we teased, we played,
Wasn't that moment just filled with joy?
I missed it but I know it cannot be replayed.

Remember when we were at the library?
We laughed, we cracked jokes till we got stomach pains,
When we were suppose to study,
I missed it but I know I won't ever see it again.

Remember when in my car we were,
We joked and we sang our hearts out,
To the tunes our ears heared,
I missed it but I know it will not anymore come about.

Remember when we were at school in the evening,
Just us both at the court for basketball,
We competed, we jumped, we did some scoring,
I missed it but I know the moment occuring will never it shall.

Am I stupid to do what I did?
Or were u stupid to not see what i see?
But we are born to make mistakes and correct it,
I guess we both failed our responsibility.

Bro, maybe I was wrong,
Or maybe you were wrong,
I wish like before we shall be,
But I guess to not be friends is our destiny.



Based on a true story, true emotions and experiences.

by scorpio
posted on 12/31/1969

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Comment by scorpio: Dec 20, 2006 8:56 am
If u had read some of my poems about me losing a friend who i regarded as my bestfriend, well this poem is a reminiscent of our good days together, and just writing this poem made me very sad, coz my former bestfriend was a great friend actually, and I'm not sure wether I'll ever have a good friend like him anymore, but like the last line of the poem said "But I guess to not be freinds is our destiny."
Comment by InMyDreams: Dec 20, 2006 3:31 pm
wow... that IS a great poem >.< i know how ya feel in a way... but u wrote this poem so good... i luv it >.< i luv how u put memories in it- all so very true... great ending
Comment by babytee33: Dec 21, 2006 12:20 pm
I know how it feels to lose a friend my best friend abandoned me and her family for some crappy guy. You are a good poet. That was a good poem.
Comment by Jessayyybearrr: Dec 21, 2006 5:58 pm
Oh hun, that is so sad. It really makes me think. Keep writing, i know you have many more to come. You're an excellent poet.
Comment by meLbeaRy88: Dec 29, 2006 11:33 pm
Nep,reading this poem makes me sad..i wish times blh diputar balik & u guys never have to be like this..this poem is really really sad sbb i watch mcm mane u guys dulu..
but times x blh di rewind & the damages have already been done..
Comment by scorpio: Dec 30, 2006 2:09 am
hehe u baca mel. takpe i dont mind. ya time cant be rewind, and i have moved on. i have given up hope on him being my fren but kenangan will be there. well life goes on, im happy now, things can be better but im grateful for evrythg i have now.
Comment by scorpio: Dec 30, 2006 2:12 am
One more thing, i wrote this poem coz ari tu i played bsktball, n he kan bz keje so he wasnt there, so wen i was resting by the side, while the others were playing, i remebered the time we played bsktball together, just the 2 of us las yer at skool in the evening coz we both often stayed in the afternun to study. well that was the inspiration here. also, i have the song "temprature rising" by tata young in my car, and wenever that was played in the air, i teringat mase i nagn dia dulu slalu nyanyi giler2 dlm kreta, same to da song "nothing in this world" by paris.
Comment by LoveLiesBleeding: Jan 4, 2007 7:04 am
i do relate to this poem in the sense that i lost a close friend to me (remember the poems about Sharon), and although it really hurts being with out them, at least you've still got some great memories together, and thats what i thought about when i read your poem.
Btw thanks for your comment, erm i dunno what to say, i suppose we all make mistakes nd have regrets...ok that doesnt help I know...
Comment by spencer: Jan 25, 2007 7:00 pm
Deep but good
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