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Starry Nite

The stars cry evry nite for me
and the moon tries to wipe their tears away.
He has stolen my every being,
the reason i survive.
I walk down a lonely road now,
with three forks in the road.
I dont know which one to take because he is not there
to guide me anymore.

Do you miss me?

No.

I dont think you do.
I dont think you care.

If i fell to the ground would you be there?

by danielradfreak
posted on 06/18/2007

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Comment by oldman: Jun 18, 2007 11:43 pm
Great work here. I read it and thought I need to see more. If you threw everyone out of your box how would one know you fell down? No one will care much until you first care enough first. btw Empty Box is quite a poem that goes depths into dark that most goths here wish they could write. You, have a mind, a very strong mind. It is as if you sit so high above and look in. You are removed. Only one with enormous intelligence can get there. It seem like the world is a tin can with you on its rim looking in. A few others are there too but those who get there sit in silence never acknowledging each other. Like an Oracle of dark Gods who just need not chat.
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