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Sovereign Of Imperfection.

Bittersweet tears rise
Behind raw crimson red eyes
Watch as they fall faster than
Her blood crusted lips spat out lies

What was it to learn hate
With misery choking in its grip
Razor poised over the white canvas of her wrist
On the last breath, her hand slipped

Shes bleeding from the inside
From the wounds your astringent hate inflicted
The slander smeared across your name, she fought against
Only to be excruciatingly contradicted

What is that makes her so insufferable
So strenuous to endure
Compared to all those uncouth naive bitches
That you seem to think are your ache's cure

Is she too repulsive to behold
Has she been broken into too many parts
Be she too candid in her expression of thought
Has she not enough love in her heart

Such a sovereign of extreme imperfection
She knows she could never be good enough for you
But she tries so hard to do everything you desire
Her will to keep struggling on in life has almost been completely used

You'll always be a superstar in her eyes.
Act like one.
Save her.

by XxSuicidalPrincess13xX
posted on 08/25/2009

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Comment by SoLittleTime: Sep 29, 2009 12:47 am
Its good. very good.
dont expect others to save you, though.
sometimes, you have to do it yourself
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Aug 25, 2009 7:21 am
Hmm...That last line ended this poem perfectly. It's a strong one. You're very articulate. I like this alot. Its heavy and Impacting. Full of thought and depression... I especially liked and can understand this line:


Such a sovereign of extreme imperfection


Yeah *sigh* Good Write!
Comment by emogothjen: Aug 25, 2009 12:04 pm
very well written. i like it
Comment by watsmyproblem: Nov 9, 2009 4:41 pm
WOW that was amazing i love the penultimate verse.. simple but bold just amazing
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