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Bad Day

He sits there
wondering and
wondering what
he did wrong
he tried to cheer her up
with a song


but...
she is still sad
and he sits there
perplexed
then she began to impend him


but... suddenly
he realized she wasn't mad
but she was downcast...
and it took him a while
to figure out what was wrong
then she said
something...
about her mom


she said it again clearly
this time
her mom...
had died
when she said this
tears filled her
eyes like
an aquarium
overflowing with water
she was cheerless


he attempted
to comfort her
but she was disconsolate
and depressed...
but gradually...
she began to...
forget her sadness
and finally she became
filled with cheerfulness

by NicholasScott
posted on 01/25/2008

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Comment by MysticFog: Jan 25, 2008 7:31 pm
Aww....thats sad...but a very good poem! I told you your poems rocked!
Comment by MysticFog: Jan 25, 2008 7:31 pm
Sorry cnat think if a title.
Comment by JulieChick951: Jan 26, 2008 7:58 am
awesome poem!!!!
Comment by fallenangelx14: Jan 26, 2008 3:55 pm
good poem :]
Comment by fallenangelx14: Jan 26, 2008 3:55 pm
good poem :]
Comment by aCrazyApe: Jan 28, 2008 11:34 am
Wow some big words
DID snoman help you?
Comment by Snoman: Jan 29, 2008 10:08 am
believe it or not i didn't help this little kid! lol i wouldn't have used those words in this poem but it's his not mine Sticking tongue out
good poem though nick Smiley
Comment by teardrops: Jan 30, 2008 6:56 pm
wow thoes are really big words i likey!! vote up
Comment by Tequilla: Feb 5, 2008 11:45 am
Really good poem!!
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