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somethings wrong

I'm sitting here,
Shaking in my chair,
i can here the sound,
That devestating sound,
ringing in my ears,
It's all i hear,
A pulse rate rises,
And i wish i could describe it,
But all I can do is hide it,
My stomach turns and twist,
As I don't reconize my wrist,
Crucial imapatience,
You see what i've taken?
your in my devestation,

by romantichomicide
posted on 12/04/2008

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Comment by cameronsgurlforever: Dec 4, 2008 11:47 am
Very strongly written. I like it.
Comment by Angel: Dec 4, 2008 12:16 pm
very good writting.
Comment by down4life: Dec 4, 2008 11:10 pm
wow lots of emotion great job!
Comment by supbuttercup: Dec 6, 2008 6:10 pm
definatly relatable. i love it!
Comment by ReverberatingSilence: Feb 5, 2009 8:56 pm
Nicely done. I extremly love travesties...

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Comment by forgottenfairy: Apr 23, 2009 11:58 am
This is amazing so well written.
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