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Slowly Dieing

It hurts to see you with her
It hurts to see you in love
Knowing that I lost you
Not long ago to her

All I feel is pain
My heart has grown cold
and empty inside
My life has
gone down the drain
My tears I always cry

We used to be so close
But now we're far apart
Because of the hurtful words
we said to one another

My world has
all come crashing down
MY life seems at its end
I cry myself to sleep at night
You're in my lonely mind

I try to tell myself
that it will be okay
I know that you'll
Soon fade away

I'll slowly forget about you
You'll no longer cross my mind
But until that day comes
My heart will slowly
DIE



by alone
posted on 12/31/1969

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Comment by xforlornxangelx: Dec 28, 2006 10:06 pm
that's good.keep writing...
Comment by NIKKIx: Dec 28, 2006 10:42 pm
Never stop writing! this is breath taking.
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Comment by LuciferHasFallen: Feb 7, 2007 11:54 am
beautiful work
Comment by ThatDarkGirl: Apr 10, 2007 2:43 pm
I think he gets it Deeplyinspired
Comment by MsKeys1707: May 14, 2007 7:48 am
This is amazing it says so much and i can truly relate to this!!
your an amazing writer
Keep Writing!!
Comment by NeVeRmOrE: Jul 31, 2007 2:46 am
i can so relate
Comment by sweetnrosie: Aug 20, 2007 6:53 pm
i can relate also and this is amazing work Smiley
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