Poem of Quotes Members
Please log in below, or sign up.



Forgot Password?
Subscribe to a premium membership! Premium membership
Search for poetry anywhere! PoemofQuotes SE

Shortness Of Breath

Elude me from the darkness
That takes me away from life
Take me away from
This cold place
Before we intertwine
This place leaves me with a Shortness of breath
I can't take this anymore;
I'm nearing my death
Grab my hand
Which cries for help
Pull on it and pull me out
Don't let me fall deeper
Where there is no life
Don't let me back in there
Where I lose my sight
Please be my saviour
Before I take my last breath
Don't let me encounter
Another death

by XxXBleedingRosexXx
posted on 05/10/2008

Vote: Vote upVote down
Comments: 8
Click here to send this poem to a friend

Comment by babytee33: May 13, 2008 6:43 am
I agree with everyone else. I also hope you are okay but great poem, you have have a future in writing. Keep up the excellent work!
Comment by coldfire146: May 10, 2008 4:12 pm
love the poem.
Comment by MonsterBabies: May 10, 2008 4:13 pm
I like it good job and feel better soon.
Comment by Darryn732: May 10, 2008 6:52 pm
I love this Poem Smiley Great Job
Comment by InMyDreams: May 10, 2008 7:04 pm
That is one of the most amazing poems i've read! Very beautifully said, and so true, i love it- keep writing
Comment by AmyRocksIt: May 11, 2008 2:20 pm
I really love this. Wow. It's so powerful.
Comment by babyboogt82886: May 12, 2008 5:06 am
Wow very intense but also very worth reading! Smiley
Comment by ashuhhland: Jun 26, 2008 1:30 am
this is so good. keep it up
Add a comment: