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She's Only Seventeen

She’s only seventeen, but…
She carves her pain in long red strips
on her forearms and thighs,
shuts the bathroom door up tight,
locks herself away and cries.
She hides the bruises on her arm
with long-sleeved sweaters,
writes her friends goodbye letters
telling them she wants things to get better.
She tries to leave the house, but her boyfriend won’t let her.
She’s been with him for almost four years,
and I’ve watched from the sidelines as she hides her tears.
Drugs, alcohol, and suicide attempts just
blur the lines within her mind,
and every day I come to find
she’s the reason I cry at night.
My best friend’s pregnant at seventeen,
by a man who cheats on her,
beats on her,
and doesn’t give a damn.
I just wish she could see he’s got nothing to give,
and she’s still got a life to live.
She’s only seventeen.

by PrettyOdd
posted on 08/04/2008

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Comment by rosilinekilledromeo: Aug 4, 2008 9:43 pm
Kick her ass man don't let her die!!
Comment by xJeskaDollx: Aug 4, 2008 6:47 pm
This is really good. I like it so much becasue of whats behind it. Its so tragic but it happens all the time. Some of it I can even identify with.
Comment by MysticFog: Aug 5, 2008 10:10 am
This is really great. I feel so bad for you, because I know what it's like to feel so helpless...Great poem.
Comment by fade: Aug 5, 2008 4:57 pm
WOW. This is amazing. What a horrible situation for you to be in, and the desperation feels so real to the reader. Great job.
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Aug 6, 2008 11:24 am
really good poem.
Comment by asdfyz: Aug 16, 2008 6:07 pm
that is so sad. Wow. So emotion filled. I hate guys that do that to girls. i would kick his ass. You need to get that igrl help though before she dies! there is always a way to help someone, you jsut have to try at least!
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