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Severe Heartbreak

I've never known pain quite like this,
I want to kiss those lips that only she can kiss.
I've never known heart break this severe,
I want to hear "I love you" but only she can hear.
I love him so much, but he loves another,
He only wants me so he can watch me suffer.
He may as well stab a knife deep into my chest,
Compared to this pain, it'd probably hurt less.
I wonder if he enjoys how much I hurt,
He may as well shove my face into the dirt.
I wonder if he knows his name is on my thigh,
I cut it in deeper with every tear that I cry.
I wonder if he knows what I'm planning to do now,
I'll find away out of this life somehow.

by GothicRomance
posted on 10/22/2009

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Comment by Adeq: Oct 27, 2009 3:21 pm
great description.
Actually, it has a message of "broken heart".
Good job!
Comment by Psychobabble: Oct 22, 2009 8:20 pm
Wow, i really love this poem. Excellent job, well done.
Comment by thepenultimatum: Oct 27, 2009 11:48 pm
Very vivid. It's always a shame what has to happen to evoke that kind of stuff
Comment by DaniDarlz: Oct 26, 2009 11:20 pm
wow this poem is amazing! the expression you use is wonderful and it definitely vents out any emotions you were feeling! keep up the good work!
Comment by lovehertruly: Oct 27, 2009 4:46 pm
amazeing wording and very deep...
Comment by simplewords: Nov 1, 2009 9:07 am
manifestation of pure hurt. hope you get over it. great rant.
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