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Sólo

Blood, running down your wrist,
you wish you could get over this.
One stroke turned into 10.
You slash again and again.

The pain feels so good,
you're just so misunderstood.
You want to tell someone,
but it's in the long run,

you know you'd hurt more.
Hopes go up but you're shoved out the door.
Back in the cold once again.
You don't want that because then,

you'd once more bleed inside,
as you slowly died.

by WhyIsSheWithHim
posted on 12/31/1969

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Comment by Sinnocence: Feb 16, 2007 2:32 am
You have the essence of a great poet...u knoe how to make it flo and im sure if u practice more u'll really be great... your pacing was good keep writing.
Comment by jaylynn: Feb 16, 2007 5:03 pm
this is a really great poem. theres a nice rythm and it has true meaning. nice job
Comment by loveme77: Feb 8, 2008 7:05 pm
Awesome poem. Very good. Moving and captivating. Death always defeats us.
Great job.
Comment by tobeloved: Mar 3, 2008 1:22 pm
Very moving.. An amazing poem. Very well written
Keep on writing.
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