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Rip my Heart Apart.

Tell me
Who's going to live my dream?
Tell me
Who's going to steal my life?

When am I going to feel it
When am I going to break
When will I finally realize
That I was just a mistake?

Love fires are uncontrollable
Like those in the forest
So how do I put it out.
How do I put it out.

One day
It's going to happen one day
And I'll be gone
And he'll be living my dream
He'll steal my life

Our songs
Become his songs
We
Becomes he
And what am I
But just a distant memory

So tell me
Where is he hiding?
When does he appear?
I'd love to be prepared
For my worst fear.

I don't know him
But he's going to live My life.
He's going to live My dream.
It's not fair
So many distressed, distraught, destroying pleas
All of them I have left

I want to scream them to you
I really, really do
Make a spark inside your ear
And let you feel some of that fear

Don't.
Please don't.
This is my life
This is My dream
I can't stand to see him steal it
This can't become something unclean.


~Too late.

by Atwood
posted on 03/25/2008

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Comment by hiddeninblood: Mar 25, 2008 5:35 pm
wow...very very good...i sure hope u can overcome these dreams and stand tall....SmileySmiley
Comment by Atwood: Mar 25, 2008 5:35 pm
..this is a nightmare.
Comment by kitten546: Mar 25, 2008 5:37 pm
amazing i love it!!!its really good keep up the good work
Comment by tobeloved: Mar 25, 2008 5:38 pm
Wow... I'm speechless. Keep writing.
Comment by tearsofrain: Mar 25, 2008 5:50 pm
iwishyouknew.
howifeelrightnow.
you probably do.
Comment by tearsofrain: Mar 25, 2008 5:51 pm
keep writing, broken one.
keep writing those words.
keep writing until you're still writing
and it hurts.
Comment by Atwood: Mar 25, 2008 5:54 pm
I feel like I lost my life.
Comment by BloodLustingElf: Mar 25, 2008 7:31 pm
very nice poem, i know sorta how you feel. keep writing and someday it will all be yours again. i wish you luck
Comment by Mangekyo: Mar 26, 2008 10:27 am
someday.............once upon a time........... its all the same..........but know this ...... with us behind u it will be urs again.....count on it.......
Comment by urabaka: Mar 26, 2008 11:47 am
Very very nice, I really like your writing.
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