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Requiem: Relinquish

Give me a reason
Give me a lie
Give me a dream
Then let me die

Relinquish me
Set me free
Emotions take flight
For no one to see

The future pauses
The past replays
New faces this time
Same heart decays

Growing sorrow
Loss of light
Embrace the darkness
Give up the fight

Floating in a sea
Dark and lonely
Rescued by a ship
Sinking slowly

A home nonexistent
A love withering away
Another stitch being tugged
Another Dark Day

Old habits flaring back to life
Paths carved with a serrated knife
Edges rusted, waiting, ready
Following slow, deep, and steady

Pain on pain
Hurt on hurt
Dust on dust
Dirt on dirt

Drowning slowly
A peaceful death
This crimson sea
Stealing my last breath

Take it all
Leave nothing behind
Free my soul
Steal my mind

To die is to live
To live is to die
To lie is to love
To love is to lie

by DarkDevotions
posted on 10/05/2008

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Comments: 27
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Comment by Babigurlbroken: Oct 13, 2008 5:42 am
Beautiful.. I love it.
Comment by RageInferno: Oct 13, 2008 4:08 am
awesome!
Comment by missingmom: Oct 6, 2008 10:06 pm
Brilliant!
Comment by mischeifinvain: Oct 13, 2008 4:23 pm
all in all a decent poem, it was a bit choppy in the middle and the analogys towards the end began to lose theyre potency and sense. other than that you conveyed your emotions vividly and it was an enjoyable read.
Comment by SIlence: Oct 5, 2008 8:09 pm
Beautifully written. A wonderfully sad tale. Good work.
Comment by NOTsoBEAUTIFULLYbroken: Oct 6, 2008 6:46 am
aww. I have one like the last verse in this one.
Comment by rhemix1992: Oct 6, 2008 9:03 am
i really liked this poem it was beautifully written.....
Comment by Haileybaby: Oct 6, 2008 9:57 am
this poem is so deep and awesome.. i love it so much.. it makes me wanna keep reading
Comment by infidel: Oct 6, 2008 12:22 pm
nice
Comment by bb29: Oct 6, 2008 3:57 pm
amazing!
i knew its gonna be great when i read that u needed to let your feelings out..
The future pauses
The past replays
New faces this time
Same heart decays
amazing verse
i vote up..
Comment by Selene: Oct 7, 2008 7:14 am
brilliant. I love this.
Comment by Shelo: Oct 7, 2008 11:24 am
Wow..This is a great poem..Beautifully written
I vote up ;)
Comment by xDagex: Oct 8, 2008 12:09 pm
Simply perfect. :]
I love your choice in words.
Comment by apollocrunk: Oct 8, 2008 2:52 pm
awesome!
Comment by kaylasheray: Oct 9, 2008 7:03 am
this is a pretty good poem... i wish i could write like that Open smile
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Oct 9, 2008 11:00 am
Amazing poem...I love it...you are an amazing poet!
Comment by mischeifinvain: Oct 13, 2008 4:24 pm
all in all a decent poem, it was a bit choppy in the middle and the analogys towards the end began to lose theyre potency and sense. other than that you conveyed your emotions vividly and it was an enjoyable read.
Comment by christi823: Oct 14, 2008 7:33 am
"Drowning slowly
A peaceful death
This crimson sea
Stealing my last breath"

wow.
that was amazing.
it was as if i could feel the ocean itself.

best poem i've read in a long time. [:

definately voting up!
Comment by team3d: Oct 15, 2008 8:11 am
Wow,great poem.My favourite part was the ending.
Comment by SmilingTragedy: Oct 17, 2008 8:48 pm
i love it..
is makes so much sense.

Comment by jacobc: Oct 19, 2008 9:01 am
Ending is the best.
Comment by newtopoems: Oct 20, 2008 7:01 am
great! *takes hat off*
Comment by Konj: Oct 27, 2008 5:13 pm
Very well written, good stuff
Comment by FairDarkness: Oct 30, 2008 12:53 pm
WOW. that was amazing Love all your poems
Comment by BloodLustingElf: Oct 30, 2008 4:01 pm
WOW!!!!!! Stunning literacy, wonderful use of words, you are a true blue poet, outstanding work, I am amazed!
Comment by Devourthedarkness: Nov 11, 2008 11:13 am
great job,im extremely proud to have the privilege of commenting your poem,im amazed..great job.
Comment by lacey618: Jan 4, 2009 12:54 am
amazing is all i have to say
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