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Redial

Dial the number,
Play it out in my head.
I Love you!
I miss you!
I want US back!
Play it all out as the phone starts to ring.
I need you!
I'm nothing!
Please give me another chance!
Listen to the conversation
Like a play in my head.
I miss you,
I need you,
I didn't mean to offend you.
Listen to rejection play out in my head.
Lose my courage.
Hang up the phone.
Wait for the courage
To redial.

by EveofDespair
posted on 01/28/2008

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Comment by forevergone1790: Jan 28, 2008 11:20 am
Very good!!
Comment by Poison: Jan 28, 2008 11:45 am
i know how that is
Comment by sassicat: Jan 28, 2008 1:47 pm
Aww i know the feeling. Good poem.
Comment by tearsofrain: Jan 28, 2008 5:36 pm
this is effing wonderful
i was practically tapping my feet to the rythm. and my heart was all beat-y with suspense
and like.
i like it =}
andddddddd
you can do so muchhh better
than fickle
cause fickle is something you're clearly not
so
ilu.
Comment by SisterofDarkness: Oct 4, 2008 6:26 pm
Jessi is amazing and leaves good comments!
Comment by SisterofDarkness: Oct 4, 2008 6:27 pm
and yeah this is one I actually liked too...
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