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Raging thoughts, Raging hormones

Raging thoughts, Raging Hormones
You can't control it now, your pulse is rising
You've had enough; you can't take seeing her with him.
Go on; throw things around, break more windows.
You look around, perfect.
Everything is broken, just like your heart.
Take the shards of glass; slide it through your wrist.
You love the crimson color, the way it drips to the floor.
There, you are perfect now.
This is the way the wanted you.
Lying on the floor in your pool of insanity.
They laugh, they giggle, a little poke or two.
Then walk away....
No looking back.
Just the way you wanted it, see?
Now you are perfect.

by xangelchildxx
posted on 05/16/2007

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Comment by meagz: May 16, 2007 6:39 pm
nice poem but the whole slitting ur wrists thing dnt really do anything but scar you like he has .
Comment by meagz: May 16, 2007 6:40 pm
nd im really srry and i know how you must be feeling write now but hey trust me it dnt do anything !!! Smiley
Comment by xangelchildxx: May 17, 2007 12:57 pm
thankyouu.
Comment by lostandlonely: May 17, 2007 1:42 pm
great poem...meagz is write though it does just scar you believe me and it may seem like nothin is here for you anymore because he is gone..but im in this exact position right now and sounds to me like all you need is a true friend...im here if you need to talk ..~Amber~
Comment by KCFangel: May 17, 2007 2:53 pm
i love it...don't listen to them..lol...i mean i agree with them to a sense, but i also get where your coming from...in order for you to feel that perfection you need to do something...that's exactly why i do it...plus for the pain...soo yeah, but anywho...great poem!!!!! </3 angel
Comment by xangelchildxx: May 17, 2007 7:06 pm
ohh just to make things clear i dont try to kill myself =] because i know my brother up in heaven has quite a future for me. haha
Comment by MsKeys1707: May 19, 2007 4:33 am
this is a beautiful poem
i love it
Comment by xangelchildxx: May 30, 2007 3:16 am
thanks
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