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rachel

Dear Rachel,
Standing all alone, in a room filled with many.
Mine eyes meet yours
and then i know
that forever i will love you
....close enough to you, i cannot get
so here i sit
gazing at you.
entranced by your beauty
so beautiful, the world could end and i would not notice.
To receive this gaze from you would bring pure joy to my heart.
But this simply cannot be
for i love you
and i am too afraid that you do not love me
So away i put my love,
in a box of secrecy
hoping only that you cannot find it
what a small irony

kc

by wwwdotcom
posted on 01/03/2008

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Comment by thefadingscene: Jan 3, 2008 3:35 pm
the word choice is a little awkward in some places. but this is obviously a very heartfelt piece. good work.
Comment by funkyninja898: Jan 3, 2008 4:59 pm
i agree that this is a very heartfelt piece. very well done. i'm sorry about her saying no, but your time will come. everyone has there time, yours just hasn't come yet. great job, keep writing.
Comment by JustAFriend0NothiongMore: Jan 3, 2008 6:02 pm
aw... she said no? damn girls... even though i am one... we're trouble born heartbreakers. Sorry dude. Great poem though.
Comment by aqua4ever: Jan 3, 2008 9:05 pm
Im sorry she said no. This is a good poem tho. Very heart felt.
Comment by SingingHeart: Jan 5, 2008 11:34 pm
Very sweet and deep, I love it, and i am sure you will find your twin soul if you were patient.
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