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Promise Me

Promise me,
You’ll be with me
No matter what you see.

Promise me,
You’ll love me,
For always and eternity.

Promise me,
You won’t break my heart,
No matter how mad you seem to be.

But how can I trust you,
When your friends are mean,
And they change you.

The sweet guy who used to smile,
And give me warm hugs,
He made my heart run a mile.

The ways his eyes used to smile when he’s talking,
The notes he gave me,
But now he’s gone walking far from here, just walking.

Promise me,
That he’ll return one day,
So I can set him free.

Set him free,
From a curse,
That’s called reality.

by HeLovesMeNot
posted on 03/04/2008

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Comment by HeLovesMeNot: Mar 4, 2008 8:30 pm
just a random little poem i wrote after i was broken up with, don't be afraid to criticise it!!
Comment by ConfusedAndBrokenChild: Mar 4, 2008 8:33 pm
i love it there is nothing wrong with it!!!!! keep up the awsome work! and i love your other poem I'm not Ready it's deep and it really made me think READ IT Smiley i also think your a awsome writer who should never stop writing, because there's no slowing down or getting bad, there's only plain and AMAZING like your poems, they're deep, and you have a way of twisting your words so they make people feel what you want them to feel, let me know when you write a new peom Open smile
Comment by Bourne: Mar 4, 2008 9:24 pm
that's a sweet poem. it's evident there's a lot of emotion behind each word.
Comment by xUnTouchedxSoulx: Mar 5, 2008 7:13 am
Amaising, deep and I feel the passion in your writting. I love it. Carry on writting.

Love xUnTouchedxSoulx
Comment by hiddeninblood: Mar 5, 2008 7:57 am
great poem
Comment by BrokenHeartsTornUpLetters: Mar 5, 2008 10:29 am
great poem.....Smiley i agree with confusedandbroeknchild Smiley
Comment by HeLovesMeNot: Mar 6, 2008 10:09 pm
thank you Open smile
Comment by thestewardofgondor: Apr 4, 2008 5:49 am
yeah great
Comment by ForgottenLove: Apr 14, 2008 3:21 pm
i agree with everybody, amazing!!!!!! stupendous!!! wonderful!! everybody's heart will also be broken at one point so good way to work through it Open smile
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