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The day you told me
We should just be friends
Was the day that everything
Had come to an end

My heart had cracked
Then broke right in two
It suddenly shattered to pieces
All because of you

So even though you broke my heart
I still find myself loving you
With all the little pieces
And wishing you still loved me too

by HeartlessAngel
posted on 11/05/2008

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Comment by SilentWords: Nov 5, 2008 1:42 pm
aww...i love this poem...its sad tho
Comment by BloodLustingElf: Nov 5, 2008 2:05 pm
aww, ls, how sad and bittersweet. I will alwys love you even if no one else will. great poem.
Comment by hiddeninblood: Nov 5, 2008 2:33 pm
hmmm...i have to agree with Elf above me..
bittersweet and its tragic...
wicked combination....
awesome poem...
Comment by StainedCrimson: Nov 5, 2008 2:41 pm
There was dramatic music in the background when I read this. Guess I got the full effect. ^^ I love it.
Comment by mylifeasacutter: Nov 5, 2008 6:38 pm
thats so true ur amazing i love ur writing
Comment by google: Nov 5, 2008 8:13 pm

I enjoy the simplicity of this poem.

Comment by Holychild: Nov 5, 2008 10:18 pm
Amazing poem. It shows your heart and thats what poetry is all about.

Jesus walks with you each day.
Love&PeaceSmiley
Comment by SilentMelodies: Nov 5, 2008 10:50 pm
God...This reminds me of this guy I like that won't like me back...
Comment by forgottenchild: Nov 7, 2008 9:42 am
Hey, great poem. i kinda felt the same way once.
Comment by friendZdogZ: Nov 7, 2008 1:34 pm
aww so short and so sweet. ok awww again L, it's beautiful!
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Nov 10, 2008 8:57 am
Thank you Kira.
Comment by volleygirl9867: Dec 2, 2008 2:30 pm
This is a really good poem. i love it(:
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