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Our Last Day

I look into your eyes as you look into mine
We hold each other as our heart beats pace with the time
Everything freezes like a block of ice
Time continuously speeding up like a tape on fast forward
Tears gather in my eyes like an ocean being filled
As your hands serve as my tissue, you gently wipe them away
I look up at you, mesmerized in your eyes
Then I realize you are beginning to cry
Silent tears in the cool of the night
I wished so badly that I could prevent the pain of separation
Feeling like bullet wounds are forming in our hearts
Bullets being the time
With each minute a bullet rips a vessel from our hearts
As time closes in our hearts begin to feel like a claustrophobic stuck in a secluded room
We wanted a way out, a way to avoid feeling this hurt
Before we could come to a conclusion, everything turned to an elusion and it was time for us to part
I kissed you slowly
You kissed me too
Then just like that I was gone from you
Now I sit and play our time spent together like a CD on repeat
Reminiscing about our last day together…
~KSC~

by MsKeys1707
posted on 03/31/2008

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Comment by hiddeninblood: Mar 31, 2008 10:08 am
wow...this a really good poem
....Smiley
Comment by bow16: Mar 31, 2008 10:44 am
Wow...This is good poem...I can relate to it...
Comment by kayla: Mar 31, 2008 1:48 pm
Aww great poem..I hope your in his arms again before to longSmiley
Comment by darthXdiablo: Mar 31, 2008 4:24 pm
excellent poem, but i think you shouldn't have put "our last day together". like a cd on repeat. it will happen again
Comment by loveXneglection: Mar 31, 2008 5:54 pm
very good! it's perfect as is, and plz make some more...they inspire me
Comment by missingmom: Mar 31, 2008 8:48 pm
Really good keyana Smiley
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