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Only Four Seasons

When I first laid my eyes on you,
A beautiful memory I will always hold,
At first about you I didn't have a clue,
But I know, my heart gave its love to your soul.

Together we held hands for a year,
A lovely year, a lovely year,
Then it was written, my fears,
For your voice I can no longer hear,
For your eyes were no longer clear,
For your body I can no longer get near.

Whenever, you, I wanted to see,
Emptiness was what it would be.

Whenever your caring voice I wanted to hear,
The air seemed to be silent and clear,

Whenever your warm hands I wanted to hold,
My hands were gripped by the chill air, cold.

Dear, I gave you everything,
I worked, cried, laughed and sweat for you,
But from you I've only gotten nothing,
I was foolish to not see this to be true.

For only four seasons we were together,
And now it lies in humiliation, tears and anger.



Based on a true story, true emotions and experiences.

by scorpio
posted on 12/31/1969

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Comment by NIKKIx: Jan 2, 2007 7:31 am
wow.. thats just great!! i love it so much!! my favorite line is "But I know, my heart gave its love to your soul" very touching.. i love this one.
Comment by InMyDreams: Jan 2, 2007 4:00 pm
wow... i love this one lotz o.O its filled with so much emotion- im sry it ended like that ... but awesome poem- u wrote it perfectly
Comment by tearsofrain: Jan 2, 2007 4:10 pm
sad... i remember the firs ttime i saw my crush... do you feel ur happy to at least have the experience, to have been with ur love for that time? i think that iwould like to hace that experiece, knowing full well how much thi sperson as hurt my friends. and woul dhurt me. (lolz but i dont have to worry about that as he doesnt know i exist...)
Comment by scorpio: Jan 3, 2007 5:03 am
Yeah at least when we were really in love, we enjoyed the moment. But when things turned sour, then it sucked. Thanx for your comments guys, but I think this poem ain't that gud. I might edit it abit later when i get inspired again.
Comment by scorpio: Jan 3, 2007 5:39 am
K i editted it and i think its a lil better.
Comment by cami: Jan 13, 2007 8:49 pm
i love this poem. its so cute it brings me memories. you're really good at this. keep it up. i like your work =]
Comment by KCFangel: Jan 16, 2007 12:18 am
i really like this poem, it has so much feeling in it and so much truth...i love it!!....<3 KC...Smiley::Keep up the great work::
Comment by SisterofDarkness: Feb 2, 2007 10:32 am
This is absolutely amazing... I love it!!!
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