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One More Day

i hear myself breathing,
but i can't feel it,

i hear my heart beating,
but all i feel is its bleeding,

all the chaos,
its more than i can control,

deep inside i feel my bones breaking,
all this pain i just keep taking,

i won't give up no matter what they say,
i just have to live another day,

i want to give up take the knife to my throat,
so many times i just want to cut,

but i can't i won't no not yet,
i can do it just one more day then the pain stops,

i believe, i believe, the echo in my brain,
comotoast and hurt, i think i'm going insane,

i want to keep it in, hidden from the world,
i don't want them to know that i'm a broken girl,

i want to fall down on my knees,
beg for his return,

but i stay strong and hold on just for one more day,
my lips they tremble with the words i want to say,

but i store it in a breaking heart,
he'll come home he will i believe,

with every tear and every prayer,
i feel myself fade farther away,

but i won't give up, never, i love him,
he'll come back if i wait just one more day...

by Waterblaze3234
posted on 04/25/2008

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Comment by Superzx5: May 4, 2008 3:44 pm
well now, that's deep and painful of you to write. I like it except for one thing, it's spelled comatose. just letting you know. GOOD JOB!
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Apr 25, 2008 10:34 am
amazing poem...awesome job.
Comment by AngelIndeed: Apr 25, 2008 10:49 am
I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment by Babigurlbroken: Apr 25, 2008 11:21 am
I relate hun.... damn that was deep..... dont sweat it hun..... ur not alone. Good write kid, keep it up!
Comment by XfroggieluverX: Apr 25, 2008 12:12 pm
i know absloutley how u feel and i really love this one... it amazing... just like wut im goin through!!
Comment by meltedsnowman: Apr 25, 2008 7:09 pm
yeah..i agree with you and all
the others...i know..going through this too..if u want to talk..feel free
Comment by TrulySincere90: Apr 27, 2008 2:00 pm
awwwSad face
Comment by childOFtheNIGHT: May 2, 2008 6:02 am
he's not coming back =(
but we'll just tell ourself that anyway...
and you know wat...you never really know

I really like this and I can see alot of people can relate to it, making it even better...good job!!
Comment by TheForgottenChapter: May 13, 2008 7:38 am
im the same way just the other way around if i just keep waiting maybe she will come back but thats all anyof us can do is just wait another day
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