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Officially The End...

I guess I never understood
Why you put me through so much pain.
And why your heart was so cold
And you acted so lame.
I offered you everything I possibly had
And still in return all you would do was get mad.
You told me a promise and said you would never brake it.
I guess these past years you’ve literally faked it.
All I can do is remember all the times you said you loved me.
And that you would put no others before me.
How could I be so stupid to believe you actually cared.
For even just one second during our love affair.
I remember the first time I saw you
Standing behind me in line.
And when you told me your heart was forever mine.
I hate remembering al the stuff we’ve been through.
I couldn’t take it anymore, I didn’t know what to do.
So I loaded the gun, and placed it to my head.
Goodbye my love.
Its officially the end.

by sUpERsTar
posted on 01/22/2008

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Comment by tobeloved: Jan 22, 2008 4:31 pm
aww.. it's so sad! but it's good! keep it up chelsey!

*voting up*
Comment by GiveMeU: Jan 22, 2008 4:31 pm
great poem! i really like it, emotionful, but that is not a word....Smiley o well....GREAT JOB!
Comment by coco813: Jan 22, 2008 4:36 pm
Wow! that is a really great poem...
Comment by tiffany: Jan 22, 2008 5:07 pm
awww that is a good poem i can relate to this i am going to vote up
Comment by PrayForMe: Jan 22, 2008 5:58 pm
Literally amazing. Smiley
Comment by Blazen: Jan 22, 2008 7:58 pm
aww wow that was so touching a beautiful poem x
Comment by Poison: Jan 23, 2008 9:36 am
its...alright..i guess..
Comment by fallenangelx14: Jan 23, 2008 11:16 am
i can totally relate. good job i guess you have to experience something like this to understand the meaning
Comment by loveme77: Jan 23, 2008 4:19 pm
WOW! I love it. You're good! I didn't know you write poems... Is this your first one?
Comment by sUpERsTar: Jan 23, 2008 7:13 pm
yeah when i get bored i write them. this is my second i think i havnt put my first one up yet. and i'm putting my third up now.


thanks everyone Smiley
Comment by heartopen: Jan 25, 2008 6:38 am
its really good
Comment by slamnspitfire: Jan 26, 2008 10:24 pm
omg i love this poem i love it keep it up!!!!!! WTG!!!!!!
Comment by christi823: Jan 28, 2008 9:57 am
Aww. This made me sad. Good poem. [:
VOTING UP!
XD
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