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Numb

Numb.
Paralized?
Sitting?
Cold.
Choking?
Gasping?
My head is definetly spinning.
No pain.
No tears.
Its cold.
Turn up the heat.
Its so cold.
Impure eyes?
Staring...
Back at me?
Quickly.
Quietly darling.
No room here.
No pain.
Cold.
So cold.
Choking?
Gasping?
Numb.

by IxDUNNOx
posted on 03/03/2007

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Comment by controlthedemon: Mar 4, 2007 6:44 am
wow,
i like this one,
i like how you use the same words,
but easch line has a different meaning!
great work!!
Comment by tearsofrain: Mar 4, 2007 8:02 am
wow, i like this one (*cough dejavu cough*) lol yah but this is really beautiful! i love it so much. its on eof those poems, the really pretty ones no one gets buthas like soooo much emotion in it.
Comment by ragingquiet13: Mar 4, 2007 12:34 pm
wow very capturing (is that a word )well u get the point i love it great use of words
Comment by theme: Mar 5, 2007 4:13 pm
its very good! just i hope i can make it so one day you don't feel like that
Comment by KillerBlueEyes: Mar 24, 2007 4:19 pm
i like how you use the words and you dont explain
Comment by NathenxDisaster: Apr 30, 2007 5:18 pm
Amazing!!!!
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