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Now You're Gone
I'm relying on Fate
To take me away
To the place I know
I can always stay.
I'm not independant
Because I had you
Now you're gone
What do I do?
I can't close my eyes
Before I sleep
Because I'm scared
Of the tears I weap
I once held you close
Now I dont have you at all
I went so far!
We did it all!
We was like, perfection!
Nothing could take your place
My heart would only accept
The beauty of your face
But now you're gone,
I'm left nothing to do.
Apart from take my life
Because of you.
I dont want to do this,
I dont want to say goodbye.
But I will with courage,
And a tear in my eye.
Would you notice me gone?
Would you even care?
All I ever wanted to do
Is tell you I'd be there.
But you pushed me away
Down a long lonely road
And all of this..
Because I moaned.
I love you.
It wasn't ment to end this way
But now arrives fate,
And leads my life astray.
Now I'm gone
My life is done
I'll remember you
And all the fun..
by huzi8t9
posted on 06/11/2008
To take me away
To the place I know
I can always stay.
I'm not independant
Because I had you
Now you're gone
What do I do?
I can't close my eyes
Before I sleep
Because I'm scared
Of the tears I weap
I once held you close
Now I dont have you at all
I went so far!
We did it all!
We was like, perfection!
Nothing could take your place
My heart would only accept
The beauty of your face
But now you're gone,
I'm left nothing to do.
Apart from take my life
Because of you.
I dont want to do this,
I dont want to say goodbye.
But I will with courage,
And a tear in my eye.
Would you notice me gone?
Would you even care?
All I ever wanted to do
Is tell you I'd be there.
But you pushed me away
Down a long lonely road
And all of this..
Because I moaned.
I love you.
It wasn't ment to end this way
But now arrives fate,
And leads my life astray.
Now I'm gone
My life is done
I'll remember you
And all the fun..
by huzi8t9
posted on 06/11/2008
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Comment by lostinpoetry: Jun 22, 2008 12:47 pm
Truely good.Comment by lostinpoetry: Jun 20, 2008 10:24 am
I really could relate to this.Comment by asdfyz: Jun 16, 2008 4:51 pm
Great poem!!!! If you can write somethign that emotion filled jsut "because you were bored" then you have serious talent!!! Truely great!Comment by huzi8t9: Jun 15, 2008 8:23 pm
Wow, all the great comments. Thankyou all 
Comment by silhouette: Jun 15, 2008 10:03 pm
really nice poem
great message. =]
Comment by Verasailles: Jun 11, 2008 6:36 pm
"But now you're gone,
I'm left nothing to do.
Apart from take my life
Because of you."
L337.
Comment by InMyDreams: Jun 11, 2008 7:07 pm
Hey :]
Well i definitely love this poem.. you wrote it amazingly well. idk what the word is for that, just the way you put together the words. and the emotion was pouring through it.. the fact that she's the footsteps to your steps :] if that made sense, i just felt like commenting about that.
Long comment.. but when things are like that and to be able to move on- the horrible words. but i mean for me to think positively i keep 2 quotes in my head if youd like to think about them. something like "you wont find the right person until you let go of the wrong person"-thats not right but it's close enough. "you'll never leave where you are until you decide where you'd rather be"
sorry REALLY long comment, bored.. and i dun mean to sound immature. but keep writing though
Comment by Zero4Nunn: Jun 12, 2008 3:07 am
Love's first loss is an Adult's first step. I wish it weren't so but it is impossible to call someone mature or an adult unless they have had their heart broken. Going through growing should be enough.Comment by babyboogt82886: Jun 12, 2008 4:54 am
I can really relate to this poem, and although its tough you gotta hold on for the bumpiness of it all. My ex who is also my best friend has been pushing me away more and more due to drugs and he's just not thinking right. I hate to see him that way, and I wonder what I can do but sometimes I don't know if there is anything you can do. All we can do is wait for it to work it self out and if it doesn't work out with that person that we so love and miss then we have something wonderful headed our way. Just keep holding on, and wait for WONDERFUL! Great poem! Thanks for sharing! Comment by greybutterfly: Jun 12, 2008 9:05 am
"I'm not independant
Because I had you
Now you're gone
What do I do?"
it's like I wrote the poem myself wow!! i totally understand what you were talking about . love it thanks
Comment by Nickole: Jun 12, 2008 11:25 am
wow thats amazing...something to think aboutComment by singlebaby: Jun 12, 2008 2:23 pm
emotions were running through me the whole time i wrote it. i love it.Comment by singlebaby: Jun 12, 2008 2:24 pm
emotions were running through me the whole time i wrote it. i love it.Comment by AngelicallyBroken: Jun 13, 2008 5:17 pm
i really like this poem,you have alot of talent.i can really relate to this...and hun you have to keep holding on no matter how hard things seem to be getting.i know he was probably your everything and now that he's gone you feel like you have nothing to live for...but you do.just keep holding on,you'll make it through.message me if you ever want to talk with someone.great poem! =]Comment by huzi8t9: Jun 13, 2008 11:08 pm
Sorry, AngelicallyBroken. I'm a bloke darlin & not gay ;) lolComment by friendZdogZ: Jun 14, 2008 1:23 pm
^lol. ok bout th poem, now it rocks, i love it. it really is emotion filled and it's just awesome. pain's a good thing dude, what don't kill ya only makes ya stronger.