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Not Yet Forgotten

My tears fall softly,
Down my pale skin as I lay
Thinking of the past or what
Is not yet forgotten.

Wrapped up deep within my duvet
My only thoughts about a better tomorrow now,
But when should we stop hoping, stop wishing;
Wishing for this war of hearts to come to an end.

Acknowledging the pain is a starter for all your problems to rise
Not being able to hide, the problems stay onboard
Day to day tasks become a chore as the problems sink you hard to the floor.

The struggle is now one sided
I see you with her a bright spark to your eye
Me left to ask why? As I lay thinking of the past or what
Is not yet forgotten.

by zoem200
posted on 07/24/2007

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Comment by haydenwyker: Jul 24, 2007 3:58 am
hey. thats really good. if thats your first, your a natural and its really coming from the heart. good one ;)

seeya

~hayden
Comment by PoemWritingGuy: Jul 24, 2007 5:37 am
Awesome start! I wish I was that good when I started. Keep doing what you're doing, it's great! Smiley
Comment by friendZdogZ: Jul 24, 2007 6:36 am
good
good
good
Comment by mzbrowneyez: Jul 24, 2007 9:11 am
great poem...i think one never stops wishing for the past....
Comment by Reeses: Jul 25, 2007 11:54 am
this is really good keep writtin
Comment by MsKeys1707: Aug 6, 2007 7:29 am
OMG this is soo amazing
OMG I can relate to it soo much the words are so deep so true I feel what you are saying pain from a failed relationship is horrible especially when you are the one left or cheated on.. It makes you ask and wonder why... I really enjoyed this very well written for your first poem
~!~KSC~!~
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