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No sunshine today

Aimlessly walking,
silently talking, to myself, in my head;
Trying to find reasons for these tears being shed.
The only reason why i'm living just walked out the door.
I'm cluthcing on tightly to these short straws.
I'm empty inside,
evrything just got up, and died.
I'm torn into pieces,
shaking from adrenaline,
surely this cant last...
How long has it been?
I havent slept for days,
my mind is growing weak
Chances of the sun breaking through, looks very bleak.

by chazie
posted on 04/19/2008

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Comment by Amiiee: Apr 19, 2008 9:59 am
beautiful poem
well written
Comment by squirrelluver2: Apr 19, 2008 10:05 am
Great poem. It's really well written. My fav part is "I'm empty inside, everything just got up and died."
Comment by missingmom: Apr 19, 2008 11:01 am
I know this feeling all too well lately! Sad but good poem.
Comment by kareohline012: Apr 19, 2008 1:44 pm
good, sad poem. really good, sad poem.
Comment by Blazen: Apr 19, 2008 2:40 pm
aww this is sad, but a very good poem x
Comment by thatgirlyoucantforget: Apr 19, 2008 4:07 pm
awesome job (:
I love the feeling of it.
Comment by LAURA18: Apr 22, 2008 6:37 pm
thats sad
but really well written
Comment by oldman: Jun 27, 2008 10:10 pm
I agree with m mom. I know this one too. oh, this too shall pass and a rainbow will reappear.
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