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my trouble

My heart aches
my soul crys
theses tears keep stinning my eyes

You looked at me
i looked away
i got that feeling of being afraid

you took my hand
t tried to pull away
but you held on untill today

you kissed my lips
as a tear slipped down my cheek
you said we'd be together for our hearts to keep

i woke up and found
your ring next to me

i walked to the kitchen
wondering why you did this to me
then i glanced at the floor
and saw a bloody covered knife laying in your hands

i fell to the ground
crying with all my might
then picked up the knife
and thrusted it into my heart
untill i was covered in blood and was an awful sight

My heart no longer aches
and my soul no longer crys
as drips of blood fill the night

by MyMisery
posted on 12/20/2007

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Comment by HeartlessAngel: Dec 20, 2007 11:46 am
ooooo i love it! great poem.
Comment by Fall3nn: Dec 22, 2007 8:41 pm
awesome poem

<3
Comment by FreeFalling: Dec 30, 2007 2:29 pm
Good poem, really sad though. Good job and keep writing.
Comment by lbrnware: Feb 19, 2008 8:48 pm
AWWWW, that poem wa so good, it was such a beautiful poem, and the ending.... was such a ..... surprise.

Loved it,
lbrnware
Comment by forevergone1790: Feb 26, 2008 12:22 pm
wooaah!! wow!!! i thought it would be like a love poem but than when it got to the end it was really sad... but you know... putting it all together it made an amazingly excellent poem
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