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My Own Walls

Day to day I lived,
I thought I knew it all.
Then when I met you,
How could I but not fall.

I lived a life of hope,
To dream was my way out,
Time had passed so fast,
I wondered without a doubt.

Inside I’ll always have you,
I’d never let you go,
My outside will be empty,
Too never see that glow.

I live in my own prison,
I built these walls of stone,
Without you by my side,
I’m destined to be alone.

by livelife
posted on 07/21/2009

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Comment by Darknessbeckonsme: Sep 9, 2009 1:17 pm
Bloody amazing darling!
Comment by rmfxa: Jul 22, 2009 1:39 am
deep as the seas
we live the pain
Comment by JennayyyCx3: Jul 22, 2009 12:02 pm
veryy good!
Comment by BreeBree: Aug 2, 2009 5:41 am
Wow. Amazing.
Comment by itsvickydude: Sep 11, 2009 10:17 am
oh my giddy gosh. i lovers it my love im actuly going to print this and place it on my wall
Comment by lovingmylove: Sep 22, 2009 8:31 pm
wow very good
Comment by MemoirsOfZidane: Sep 28, 2009 5:01 am
Bravo, very touching and inspirational. It reveals what your true feelings are. Keep at it, good job =D
Comment by jussjess38: Oct 2, 2009 5:20 am
great! I liked.
Comment by skittles: Oct 5, 2009 3:33 pm
this is amazxing i love it...that is how i feel daily you dont understand how much i love the fact that i can relate to other pple and not feel alone..
Comment by mybeloved: Nov 4, 2009 8:04 pm
love it, very nice.
Comment by meltedsnowman: Nov 5, 2009 7:51 pm
it really was amazing.
Comment by Throwinguprainbo: Nov 11, 2009 10:13 am
Wow. I SEEM SO CRAPPY NEXT TO ALL YOU GUYS!! man, you write really well. *jealous!!!*
Comment by prettyspl: Dec 5, 2009 11:41 am
Beautifully sad .. touching and soulful. Excellent write! : )
Comment by NaturalBeauty: Dec 11, 2009 9:29 pm
amazing. very very very good.
Comment by letmego: Dec 12, 2009 12:24 pm
wow, so much emotion. It's very sad, touching and so beautiful.
Comment by spicysalsa1: Dec 12, 2009 1:36 pm
when i read it, it was like someone had reached into my life and based it off of that. i feel exactly like this. it is very touching. if only the guy i like would read it...... but anyways brova!!!!!!!Smiley
Comment by SoSo: Dec 23, 2009 3:30 pm
i love the last stanza Smiley
Comment by livelife: Jan 3, 2010 8:07 pm
Thanks everyone..
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