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my drowning voice

Falling down like rain
Running like a stream
I continue to cry
With a silent scream

Hoping to be heard
Not left behind
Knowing that someone
Will eventually Find

Searching for the truth
Knowing its there
Just open your eyes
Get rid of the blank stare

I am in front of you
Not a leaf crumbling on the ground
Maybe someday
Love will abound

Rise above the fear
High above the pain
Will I ever be protected
From the never ending rain, never again.

by Elizzybeth86
posted on 01/25/2008

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Comment by aCrazyApe: Jan 25, 2008 11:38 am
WOW very good
On the last stanza third line you need to flip be and I
VERY VERY GREAT JOB THOUGH!!!
The last stanza was my favorite!!! Smiley
Comment by Elizzybeth86: Jan 25, 2008 11:41 am
Thanks A Lot!
Comment by Poison: Jan 25, 2008 11:43 am
Very good!
Comment by forevergone1790: Jan 25, 2008 12:15 pm
I agree.. very good
Comment by MyMisery: Jan 25, 2008 12:41 pm
yes it is very good and touching
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