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My Brightest Star I See Tonight

Brightest star I see tonight
How do you bring the world in light
When dark is darkest and hell is real
Where lust and greed is mans greatest appeal
Where love is forgotten and life is so cold
Where death and fire have such a hold
How can you shine in the darkest of nights
How can you hope with just your light
And how,I ask, do you do this each day
In this deepest,darkest, world of decay
Brightest star I see tonight
How do you bring the world in light
Brightest star please hear my cry
I do not wish to imply
My deepest sorrows in the midst of you
But I am hurting and bleeding for you
I just want an answer for my soul
So that, brightest star, you can make me whole


By: Ashley Hathaway

by loveseekerhatefinder
posted on 11/20/2007

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Comment by kitten546: Nov 20, 2007 6:37 pm
wow its very beautiful!!and i get where ur going in this i love it!!^.^
Comment by loveseekerhatefinder: Nov 27, 2007 6:47 pm
Thanks!
Comment by henrie: Mar 14, 2008 3:56 am
this is good =)
Comment by hiddeninblood: Apr 14, 2008 6:31 am
wow... i agree...this is beatiful poem...Smiley
Comment by watelse2say: Apr 17, 2008 7:33 pm
hey makes me feel to be that 'brightest star' Smiley
Comment by darksideofme: Oct 12, 2008 7:15 pm
Nice...... It really makes me think.
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