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Mr nice guy

I hate your name
I hate your voice
I cant believe you made that
choice
To be with her and not with
me
"this is the way its meant
to be"
Your a lier
Your a cheater
And I'll see your soul
in hell
I cant believe I fall
Your such a fake
I cant still believe you did
this shit to me
You said I love you every night
But it was her you'd hold tight
Now if i get just one last
wish
Everything you've will come
back on you
show you just what you have
done
Do not fear do not cry
remember your a "nice guy"
you dont hurt others they
hurt you
I heard your fake ass tears
Boo-baby-boo
And no i do not care
and no i do not cry
and no i do not miss
Mr. Nice GUY

by twiztidAngel
posted on 06/09/2009

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Comments: 18
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Comment by missdramaqueen011: Jun 16, 2009 6:44 pm
this is amazing. keep writing Smiley
Comment by jenni: Jun 30, 2009 11:54 am
I know waht you are goin through. I'm goin through the same stupid shit. I ask myself over and over how aI could have believed the lies. why didn't i see right through them. why are they so believable? we'll never know.
Comment by Essence: Jul 4, 2009 1:16 pm
Great i love it!!and keep writing! and do me a favor for me please... slap Mr. Nice guy as hard as u can for me
Comment by Greyhoundfb: Jun 15, 2009 12:51 am
DAMB YOU AREA DAMB GOOD WRITER.
Comment by indefinitely: Jun 9, 2009 6:12 pm
this is a great poem, and screw him, you don't deserve him anyway!!
Comment by xHurricane: Jun 9, 2009 8:34 pm
wow! you sound angry and very vindictive, this poem is very expressive, I feel the anger for a cheater in here. I've felt it too. I liked this one, Nice work!

Write on!

xHurricane
Comment by Perpetual: Jun 9, 2009 11:15 pm
dang!
this poem is amazing!
I can sorta relate...
im sorry this happend to you
=[ always here for a talk if ya need it.
~Best Wishes =]
Comment by NiceGuysLoveBetter: Jun 10, 2009 10:58 am
I am a true nice guy. I have raised 3 kids, and witnessed 2 child births that were not of my own children.

I'll give you a lesson about a majority of men in today's world.

They all act nice at the beginning, because they are trying to get to something.

But real nice guys are out there, and a majority of the time. They are the sensitive type. If you've ever seen a real quiet guy that may be shy, he is most likely sensitive and is going to grow up into a true man that most pathetic guys in this world cannot live up to.

The men with the bods and the tattoo's aren't going to stick by your side through thick and thin.

You gotta' find someone who despite any argument, fight, or hateful words have been said, that they are still there for you day after day.

The number one way to turn a Real Nice Guy against you is to break trust. For they will no longer feel loved, they feel they're pursuing someone who doesn't feel the same about them.

Great poem, I am going through the hardship of love as we speak, and I am a nice guy.

Just remember, true sincerity will pay off. Just don't throw yourself into a situation to be taken advantage of.
Comment by LunaGetsuna: Jun 10, 2009 1:14 pm
..... i am sorry.... so sorry
Comment by Heartbroken120: Jun 10, 2009 2:43 pm
yeah.
Comment by PerpetualNature: Jun 10, 2009 9:11 pm
That was a sad story. I am sorry for that.
Comment by SilentStorm: Jun 12, 2009 11:37 am
gurl he aint worth ur time 2 cry that takes out time that it seems not 2 give
Comment by taybby: Jun 14, 2009 7:30 pm
haha i agree!
Comment by MoonViolet: Jun 15, 2009 6:08 am
This is so fucking good!
Comment by sadseas: Jun 18, 2009 9:35 am
Great Poem,But I'm sorry though.I agree with everybody else too. Dont waste your time being sadMad its not worth it.He's not worth it!!
Comment by someone: Jun 21, 2009 8:15 am
you can't just go around cheating on people breaking their hearts, there's too many of us on the planet already and that's why we have so many natural disasters, you will be dammned when you depart if you keep doing it because MOTHER NATURE is pissed at us ALL already ...
Comment by KayHughes: Jun 23, 2009 1:36 pm
It takes more muscles to frown than it does to smile, so put a huge smile on your face when you punch him square in the nose... heheOpen smile nah im joking...he'll realise hes made a mistake one day when he sees how happy you are with someone else...just dont fall for the "i was so stupid for letting you go" crap...trust me...it hurts more watching them leave a second time!

Keep your chin up..things will get better xx
Comment by brokedup: Sep 27, 2009 11:49 pm
i loved it...
keep writing much of this type so that the guys like this can get to know how it feels when a heart is broken..its not bout crying with thw same pain but move on in life without wasting a single minute by thinking of such cheaters...
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