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Moving on

hello
are you there
are you listening
do you care
im dying on the inside
dont you see
im hiding behind these fake ways
this really isnt me
im always hurt
im always sad
its all her fault
why im always mad
she threw my love away
and made me feel blue
i was trying so hard
just to please you
why couldnt you see
i was there
by your side
i really did care
well stacy today is a new day
and im moving on
so dont come lookin for me
cause ill already be gone

by John
posted on 06/25/2007

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Comment by lookinfortherightgal: Jun 25, 2007 7:51 am
its about time you say your over Stacy, dude she is awesome but she was ment to just be our friend!
better to say harder to do, i dont think your over her, but im sure you will be!
Comment by DarkDay: Jun 25, 2007 8:36 am
Wow, i really like it, the words are simple yet they make the poem really flow, love it
Comment by tiffany716: Jun 25, 2007 9:29 am
This poem is really good! I like how it rhymes and stuff too!! Smiley
Comment by tearsofrain: Jun 25, 2007 9:44 am
love it. good for you =)
Comment by DeVdoll343: Jun 25, 2007 10:12 am
It's soooo hard to move on when you have such big feelings for somebody. So congrats... keep her in your heart, stay friends.. move on. It's the best way to go. I really like your poem and how it's written, by the way. The rhyming works beautifully.
Comment by Reeses: Jun 25, 2007 10:31 am
nice poem i can never write like that lol trust i tried
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