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More than a wish!

I live in a land of dark
If u want to find me
My screaming is a tottal bark
if u want to hear me
and i wish for a new start
if u can let it be
a whole new world
than what i always see
i wish u can turn off the radio
when it's so high,so u can't hear me scream
i wish u could soft ur words
cuz they are harder than they seem
if i shout so loud for u
just becz of this one word
if the words are more than few
why am i still unheard?
my feelings r melting i wish to help them burn
u look my way um standing clean
but all u did was turn
why am i still unseen?
as days are passing
i wonder when is it time?
as for this high dam
i'll go for the highest i can climb
i wish for the darknes to be lit by your hand
and for this place to be a flowerish land
but if a wish upon a star
just can't come real
if um on the wrong way,going so far
why can't u correct what i feel?
but again i remember i'm unknown
for this world my screaming is a wrong tone
i'm lost in this desert which no one can find
i know that forever i wont reach your mind
i wish that u are what my feelings are covered
i wish to change the fact that i'm undiscovered
what a dream that u can change all what i wish
if only this was more than a wish!!

by brokentwice
posted on 05/02/2008

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Comment by asdfyz: May 2, 2008 10:02 am
awww that is so sweet! I hope your crush notices you. sometimes u jsut got to wait him/her out (I as victim to the same situation and FINIALLY after a year and a half i go my shot and now my girlfriend and I are 8 months and going strong)

Love the poem. It is really heartfelt and you can tell that you really care aobut him.
Comment by Waterblaze3234: May 2, 2008 11:50 am
i know how you feel i wish for someone special to but yet i have more than a wish! this is really beautiful great job
Comment by coldfire146: May 2, 2008 12:01 pm
personally i know how you feel i also am waiting to be seen by somebody that i love i love your poem and it really dose show that you love him/her keep writing great poems Smiley
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