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its winter

the freezing cold
peircing my heart
the frozen ice
breaking apart.
as i walk across
this white land
i wish u were here
holding me hand.
and when i fall
no one is there
only the cold snow
surounding me evrywhere.
and evrything hurts
my body and my soul
the pain is numb
when im left so cold.
the sun is hidden
the clouds cover the sky
and i feel no warmth
but i dont know why.
becuz the ice is melting
and the snow has disapeared
but my heart is still frozen
and my pain is still here.
im still fallen
on this now wet ground
and im still looking for u
but youre noweher to be found


by uNpReDiCtAbLe
posted on 12/31/1969

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Comment by Christina1985: Jan 18, 2007 1:42 am
Aww..i love it. I love the way it rhymesss...i love the whole thing..it's so cute ... <33 Christina
Comment by alex: Jan 18, 2007 9:00 am
wow i really like this its amazing!!!! Great Job!!!
Comment by elitexxtragedy: Jan 19, 2007 6:37 pm
you are an amazing writer, ilove each and every poem i see. the way you used describtion was wonderful. and the nature to explain your ffeeelings.
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