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Midnight Sun

The light rises its time to enjoy
My head hits that pillow happiness destroyed
Hollowed feelings like fingers around my throat
Alone in an ocean in a sinking boat

Pendent of hope pierces through the grey
Making it possible to start another day
Climb over this mountain to tackle the one beyond
One day soon these feelings will be gone

The sword lunges through, sinking deep inside
Burden now gone no wound left behind
Midnight sun shines upon my face
Keep on running in the never ending race

Pull down the covers and think of what to do
Cast the memories into shadow, forget about who?
Life light still burn in the fog of confusion
God take away my disillusion

by Acheron
posted on 09/30/2009

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Comment by sharon123: Sep 30, 2009 7:12 pm
this is amazing
great !
Comment by chiwa: Sep 30, 2009 4:52 pm
very nice. can relate.
Comment by Zach31: Oct 24, 2009 12:41 am
two thumbs up for you!..
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Sep 30, 2009 12:57 pm
whoa...*shakes off shock*
Sean...This is really deep. Incredible--I'm almost speechless---ALMOST ;)
I really like this though its so...full of despair.
but you're an amazing write I always enjoy your poems...
if you need to talk, I'm all ears, Hun *hugs*
Great Write!
Comment by LostInDarkness: Oct 1, 2009 9:33 am
This is amazing! I love it! I cant believe you think I'm better you when the real answer is so clear! Great job Sean!
Comment by SilentWords: Oct 1, 2009 8:31 am
God take away my disillusion

That last night stayed with me. Lovely..
Comment by J3SI: Sep 30, 2009 1:40 pm
I love the way you used only metaphors
Awsome poem keep writing
Comment by Luv4shelly: Sep 30, 2009 2:05 pm
this is stunning, amazing job!
Comment by jimbo85: Oct 2, 2009 12:44 pm
it is really good
Comment by FallenAngel666: Oct 1, 2009 6:30 am
OMG! this is sooooo good. i enjoyed every word, i felt it as i was there. lol great job.
Comment by deathsmessanger: Oct 1, 2009 5:59 am
Very amazing poem, You write very good poems.

Keep on writing.
Comment by Uncertain: Sep 30, 2009 3:33 pm
Beautiful, like all your work
Comment by trishaaa08: Sep 30, 2009 3:42 pm
I love it! well written.
Comment by LKR: Oct 1, 2009 6:17 pm
good. I'll bet you put alot of work into this.
Comment by Xenoz: Oct 3, 2009 10:58 am
Crazy incredible! Love this!
Comment by Hiddenot: Oct 2, 2009 5:53 pm
This is beautiful hon. Keep writing... I'm all ear for tonight.
Ur amazing just know what and don't forget.
~Tiffany...
Comment by random96: Oct 4, 2009 7:02 am
i love this part...
~The sword lunges through, sinking deep inside
Burden now gone no wound left behind
Midnight sun shines upon my face
Keep on running in the never ending race~

awsome!
Comment by deadiam: Oct 4, 2009 3:40 pm
beautiful thats what im going through right now
Comment by Darkdaydreamer: Oct 4, 2009 5:21 pm
This is awesome Sean, you are amazng!
Comment by GothicRomance: Oct 5, 2009 6:40 am
... :O
oh
my
god.
THIS IS FUCKING AMAZING!!!!!!!!!
your just... wow I'm just speechless.
far out this poem is so amazing & perfect.
Comment by lexxie2323: Oct 5, 2009 6:17 pm
wow that was amazing, beautiful, spectacular, epic, holy shit man!
Comment by vadim7: Oct 5, 2009 10:19 pm
sweet
Comment by angelofthetruth: Oct 6, 2009 1:12 pm
this is good
Comment by HeyLookItsMe: Oct 6, 2009 8:54 pm
I quite like it. Hope to hear more.
Comment by deep: Oct 7, 2009 2:19 am
good one
Comment by sonara: Oct 7, 2009 12:44 pm
i felt something reading this
Comment by secretangel: Oct 7, 2009 7:19 pm
this is a really great poem. i hope you can make some more great poems like this
Comment by Rhodrithomas: Oct 8, 2009 12:21 pm
very deep, love it
Comment by Fathom: Oct 24, 2009 10:41 pm
wow... great poem. I love the style, too.
Comment by xXJennyKrisstyXx: Oct 24, 2009 10:40 am
That was beautiful.
Good job. =D
Comment by harley: Nov 8, 2009 2:05 am
sean, i am so sorry...
Comment by darknessofcrows: Oct 15, 2009 3:13 am
Awesome!!!!! I read it twice.... i really like it. ups.
Comment by Orlamolly5: Oct 16, 2009 6:55 pm
I'm feeling this one. It's good.
Comment by Callousedheart3: Oct 17, 2009 5:26 am
Like this poem a lot. It's awesome.
Comment by jaybayybayy808: Oct 19, 2009 10:49 pm
this is nice!
snapps for you:]
Comment by TiffantAnnLoganAdams: Oct 23, 2009 6:50 am
loved it
Comment by DarkFireLightRain: Oct 26, 2009 6:53 pm
Do you still love cristy then?
Comment by DarkFireLightRain: Oct 26, 2009 6:57 pm
Do you still love cristy then?
Comment by Acheron: Oct 30, 2009 8:45 am
yes i do darkfirelightrain this was writen brfore her and i got back together
Comment by simplewords: Nov 1, 2009 8:54 am
god take away my disillusion. great.
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