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Melted Love

Honey,
I love you,
Hey baby,
I really do miss you.

But honey,
Do you see the bright rays when you're with me?
Or do you only see cloudy days?
For me, it is the second unfortunately.

Honey, we've been together for more than a year,
But maybe I still don't understand you,
To cause you unhappy is what I fear,
But for me being here might be more painful for you.

Honey, I'm inexperienced,
I am quite ignorant to my duties,
There are still so much for me to learn,
I wish you would give me the opportunity.

Honey, I wish sometimes you surprise me,
With kisses or just your love,
But why does it always be first from me?
Why can't it sometimes be from you?

Honey, I've thought alot,
Maybe for love I'm not ready,
Maybe I'm not the man you think you got,
Maybe without me you'll be more happy.

Honey, do you think it's better for us not to be together?
Or do you think I can really make you happy,
We even seldom see each other,
I think you're beautiful, but maybe it's time for another guy to see your beauty.

I still love you alot honey,
But I'm very sorry,
I really tried to make you happy,
But maybe it is just not meant to be.




Based on true feelings and emotions.

by scorpio
posted on 12/31/1969

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Comment by scorpio: Dec 11, 2006 7:17 am
I'm really really sad when I wrote this poem coz I just had an argument with my gurl, pretty often unfortunately, we've talked about it, and I've given alot of thought about our relationship, and hmmmmm, maybe this poem says what might come next. :'(
Comment by VanishedForever: Dec 11, 2006 6:36 pm
omg its beautiful .. it says so much...
if this is how u really feel then maybe its not to be..
but u will find happiness one day...
i know you will cuz you are a perfect guy and any girl who thinks different is crazy.. and the girl you are with now is lucky ...
and i dont know whats going on in the relationship but she is nuts .. cuz she might loose u..
and then she will realize that when your gone that she made the biggest mistake of her life...
so make her realize it .. cuz by the way i see it.. is that she doesnt see what i see
Comment by meLbeaRy88: Dec 12, 2006 1:50 am
hey,that wasnt really a nice thing to say,vanishedforever..u never met her..i personally think she's beautiful & so sweet..but then again,maybe u're right.. Sad face
awwww...its so sad to know thats what u really feels.u know,i really wish we can have a trip together again like just now & u bring her along..
im sorry to know that things doesnt been going so good between u & her.. great poem,tho..but very sad..
Comment by scorpio: Dec 12, 2006 7:15 am
thanx guys for ur comments. well hope things might turn out gud, but i don't really expect that to happen.

well honestly shes a great gurl, really great gurl, but sometimes we cant connect. n sometimes i feel like its best for us not to b together, even tho we love each other.

anyway mel, lol (i cakap BM sini, taknak diorg faham), macam i cakap dlm my msg to u, mesti u pikir i pelik kan, byk sgt prob, ngan ur "u-know-who" la, ngan my abah la, now ngan my gurl plak. lol kadang2 prob dtg banyak2 skali.
Comment by meLbeaRy88: Dec 12, 2006 8:40 pm
no la,dude..i x pikir pun u pelik.my probs, entah2 lebih byk dr u..but i buat x tau je..coz if i keep thinking bout it,i takut i jadi giler nnt..mcm u ckp dulu at me, just let things flow by itself.. Smiley but this poem really sad ler..
Comment by meLbeaRy88: Dec 12, 2006 8:41 pm
Sad face
Comment by InMyDreams: Dec 13, 2006 5:09 pm
aww thats an AWESOME poem- and i know how ya feel >.< mel u gotta teach me that language lol- luv the poem tho, cant wait to read more!!!
Comment by xfobxfanx: Dec 16, 2006 12:52 am
ur poems are so deep this one brought tears to my eyes u are a very emotional and beautiful person
Comment by scorpio: Dec 16, 2006 8:29 am
appreciate ur comments! n thanx so much!
Comment by alex: Dec 17, 2006 4:34 pm
wow amazing i loved it!!!!
Comment by meLbeaRy88: Dec 17, 2006 7:28 pm
i feels so sad reading sad love poems right now.. Sad face
i feels lebih sedih when hear lagu sedih..
Comment by jakthereaper: Jan 14, 2007 9:34 am
man sad poem but heres the thing maybe you too dont connect but do you love her???
just because you too dont seem like the same person doesnt mean you have to let that get in the way of love you too should talk you might have alot morein comon than you might think... including love hope you take my advice man
Comment by elitexxtragedy: Jan 19, 2007 4:23 pm
i really do love your writing. you have such emotioin and feeling and i like the way you took this poem. you defiently deserve your stop in the point leaders, if even not higher. maybe i can help with that by commenting your amazing stuff.
keep it coming.
Comment by BrokenSoul: Jan 31, 2007 10:07 am
hey dont worry....my bf is doing what you were or are...and it doesnt feel good to me but i'll get over it sometime hopefully....but it is a good poem i think you wrote down everything my bf would say and i think you are a great poet!
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