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M.S

If pain ment anything to you
Why cant you see it in my eyes?
I dont even know who i am
Im lost somewhere in you lies
Your screaming at me now
You know i hate it when you shout
These tears arnt of joy
There of being trapt with you right now
Im hiding in this room
Your banging down the door
Im trying to block you out
I dont want you to hurt me anymore
"Dont make me fuckung angry just open the fucking door"
Your hurting me
Please let me go
Im sorry baby i promise ill change
And in that moment
As he holds me in his arms
He comforts me from all my pain
I stare in to his eyes
And i know he loves me again

by coma
posted on 03/31/2007

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Comment by nickson104: Mar 31, 2007 2:55 pm
awwww thats a nice ending... i loved it! awesome writing
Comment by darknessgirl: Mar 31, 2007 2:55 pm
wow! I love it! you have talent!
Comment by whocantlovme: Mar 31, 2007 5:38 pm
i love the poem...i have to agree with nickson104 great ending loved it.........
Comment by adarkdeath: Apr 2, 2007 2:08 pm
awesome...i dunno what to say its good
Comment by MrNobody: Apr 9, 2007 3:45 pm
i agree with both of them good ending. as well as beginning, middle. hell, its great as a whole poem!
Comment by MechanicalAnimal: Sep 13, 2007 9:09 am
Hmm... I don't think it's a nice ending because it seems to me the guy's an ass but the girl thinks he's being nice in the end because she wants to believe it so much. I don't know, maybe I'm just reading too much in to it. Great poem either way.
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