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Lucky

I have everything, right?
Perfect Christian family,
The most adorable dog
You’ll think I have it all
You’d say I’m lucky.

Nice home, fashionable room
Food to eat
Name-brand clothes, expensive shoes
The latest electronics…
You’ll think I have it all
You’d say I’m lucky.

Real diamond earrings
A promise ring
A visit to the hair dresser
Every two weeks
You’ll think I have it all
You’d say I’m lucky

A church family
Smiles and hugs everywhere I go
An example of a loving Christian
I like to sing, did you know?
You’ll think I have it all
You’d say I’m lucky.

I have everything a girl could want
You think I’m so lucky
I have everything I need in life
But why am I so broken inside?
Why do I cry?

by babytee33
posted on 03/21/2008

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Comment by tobeloved: Mar 21, 2008 7:23 am
Awww... that's sad. You expressed yourself really well Smiley keep writing
Comment by fallenangel6636: Mar 21, 2008 7:35 am
that is sad and it proves that money cant but happyness cuz it seems you have alot of one and not much of the other.
Comment by MsKeys1707: Mar 21, 2008 8:52 am
this is sad, your emotions really come through
That is why I do not judge people on the things they have because you can have everything in the world and still feel like nothing if you are missing the main important thing in your heart that you are so destined to find... Just keep your head up and stay strong.. You are not lucky you are blessedSmiley
This is truly an amazing poem
Keep writing and take careSmiley
Comment by echodelta112: Mar 21, 2008 11:03 am
that's really sad... but i think you want something real and not just material possessions.

beautiful poem... i hope you find what you need...
Comment by BrokenHeartsTornUpLetters: Mar 21, 2008 3:24 pm
w-w-w-o-w-w-w
Comment by danielle: Mar 21, 2008 10:09 pm
being lucky doesnt always mean happy
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