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Love yet
Don’t you know that our love may never die?
Don’t you know that we’ll never be alright?
And our hearts will never find another
Chance for love… because we love each other?
Do you realize how much I care for you?
Every day is a torture if I’m not with you…
Standing by the bridge just one step away
From giving up on life just so you may
Forgive me my mistakes, forget the past
And let my soul be near, at last.
Ready for hard criticism =]
by Fathom
posted on 10/24/2009
Don’t you know that we’ll never be alright?
And our hearts will never find another
Chance for love… because we love each other?
Do you realize how much I care for you?
Every day is a torture if I’m not with you…
Standing by the bridge just one step away
From giving up on life just so you may
Forgive me my mistakes, forget the past
And let my soul be near, at last.
Ready for hard criticism =]
by Fathom
posted on 10/24/2009
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Comment by Xenoz: Oct 25, 2009 10:02 am
Hm, I really love this one. Very...emotional.
Both =) and =( at the same time.
Good job.
*votes up*
Comment by deep: Oct 25, 2009 2:15 am
oOh very good one .. i wish everything fix soOn ..
but keep it up ..
waiting for your stuff
Comment by Fathom: Oct 25, 2009 11:58 am
=] Comment by thepenultimatum: Oct 27, 2009 11:44 pm
I liked it. I think it just needs a bit more refinement to read better(though some of the appeal is how raw it is).Comment by TiffantAnnLoganAdams: Oct 26, 2009 10:24 am
I loved it so much
Comment by nina777: Oct 26, 2009 1:00 pm
how sweet that was so beautiful Comment by Adeq: Oct 26, 2009 9:33 pm
The magnitude of the words this poems holds is hidden in the fact that its really short. Much words lose the point, but this poem escaped all that. Good one, I love it!!Comment by Shellibean21: Oct 28, 2009 2:37 pm
I like it alot so sad...Comment by deadinside212: Oct 27, 2009 5:02 pm
This was amazing. i loved it. keep writing.Comment by Fathom: Oct 27, 2009 6:50 pm
lol I wouldn't add any more to it. Don't think I would be able to, anyway. It's kind of like writing: "The roses are red, violets are blue..." Any longer and it becomes more of a poem... but more mistakes, too. Comment by SweetTea: Oct 27, 2009 7:19 pm
Ahh such good writing! Don't ever let writing go.Comment by AndThePointIs: Oct 27, 2009 8:13 pm
keep writing. you're amazing.Comment by cocosbaby10: Oct 28, 2009 7:46 am
that was so sweet. I love it.Comment by Throughwithlove14: Oct 28, 2009 8:42 am
That was really great. Very relateable. *IDK if I spelled that right.* LolComment by nubishpoethere: Oct 29, 2009 5:55 pm
=>Comment by Leeshio: Oct 29, 2009 6:15 pm
<3Comment by NaturalBeauty: Oct 30, 2009 6:09 pm
omg! i love this poem! i can really relate half of my poetry is like this tooComment by stratosgreek: Oct 31, 2009 5:44 am
dang that ws deep! i never read poetry but now i am so in to it!having some problems of my own. i dont now how to expres them on paper!
very nice poemvery nice
stratos
Comment by jazon132: Nov 2, 2009 5:23 am
i realy like it. 
i know wat u feel,, good luckComment by nina777: Nov 3, 2009 2:17 pm
nice poem i like it
It got to me, Fathom, though it absolutely inspires me...
*votes up*