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Love hurts

Holding it in
is so hard to do
it's so hard to tell you...
he loves you
trying to build up the courage
been waiting so long
he finally told her but...
he said it wrong
the slap in the face...
hurt bad
then suddenly he was feeling...
mad
he pushed her back...
she hit her head...
then he realized she was dead.

by NicholasScott
posted on 12/06/2007

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Comment by BEAUTIFULPHATMAMA: Jul 1, 2008 4:28 pm
WoW! These one is really good
Comment by kitten546: Dec 6, 2007 6:49 pm
wow its really good 4 a death poem well keep writin cause ur really goodSmiley
Comment by R3DandBLACKstars: Dec 8, 2007 11:51 am
wow.

i like this one.
good job!

thanks for the poem comment too
Comment by fallenangelx14: Jan 26, 2008 3:55 pm
wow i like this one! great job. keep writing
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