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love's a painter

i tasted your lips and paint a picture.
i felt your love and brace any adventure.
your this fear, my only fear.
lost in a divide from there to here.
there's a weakness in the rooms shadows.
hear my foot steps in this lost loves meadow.
i'll find you again'
you know i will.
just paint a picture of a perfect view
and i swear i will come to you.

by darthXdiablo
posted on 08/16/2008

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Comment by ashuhhland: Aug 20, 2008 2:39 pm
wow thats amazing i really really like this alot
Comment by Holychild: Aug 19, 2008 1:32 pm
Very good poem, keep up the good work.
God bless you with Love&PeaceSmiley
Comment by Haileybaby: Sep 4, 2008 2:53 pm
so so cute... i love it
Comment by hiddeninblood: Aug 16, 2008 10:01 pm
damn brother!!!!you made me so jeaoulous right now...i envy you...in a good way...you know like making me want to try better....no excellent on my next poem...this is awesome...what i was craving for...your work...thx for the delightful read...hey everyone this guy is my brother...awesome poet..
Comment by TheDarkShadow: Aug 17, 2008 12:38 am
hey man...fuck the rust
if this is you rusty, cant wait to see you polished

I know its lame...but i liked it Sticking tongue out
Comment by brianabee: Aug 17, 2008 11:07 pm
this is great. well written!
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Aug 18, 2008 10:57 am
Yes this was a really awesome poem!
Comment by blackinatedsnow: Aug 18, 2008 6:08 pm
Ohmygosh. I loved it. To be honest, it's really amazing. My poems, well, I really think they are good, but can I have your Opinion?
Open smile
Thannnkkkxxx.
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Comment by darkangel122: Aug 19, 2008 1:02 pm
I love it. This is a really awesome poem.
Comment by darkangel122: Aug 19, 2008 3:18 pm
I love it.
Comment by Dreamer20: Aug 24, 2008 9:11 am
Great job. I loved it. Smiley
Comment by gothchik13: Aug 24, 2008 5:46 pm
very nice!!! by that i mean... you rock!!!Smiley
Comment by gothchik13: Aug 24, 2008 5:47 pm
very nice!!! by that i mean... you rock!!!Smiley
Comment by alifenotlived: Aug 20, 2008 7:11 pm
Hey. That was awesome. My heart kinda stopped for a second there.
Comment by gerbera24: Aug 21, 2008 12:25 pm
you put a lot of meaning into a small stanza so simply.
the first line completely hooked me.
very nice. =]
Comment by asdfyz: Aug 22, 2008 6:11 am
mm very good. great job. IT is so simple and beautiful at the same time.
Comment by fromdusktodawn: Aug 23, 2008 11:53 am
thats good not to rusy.
Comment by zozo: Aug 24, 2008 1:21 pm
good job,
i love it!
keep up the good work!
its fab x
Comment by IrOcKmYoWnSoX: Aug 25, 2008 4:23 pm
wow!! really good =]
Comment by Xou94: Aug 27, 2008 8:32 am
Did a very nice job. Definately keep writing. Smiley
Comment by AngelicallyBroken: Aug 27, 2008 12:50 pm
this is good.
Comment by BEAUTIFULPHATMAMA: Aug 27, 2008 9:17 pm
"BEAUTIFUL POME"!
Comment by lonelyandforgotten: Sep 4, 2008 7:46 pm
this is very good. i like the symbolism
Comment by longlivetheaged: Sep 15, 2008 5:51 pm
just want points
Comment by nunubaby09: Sep 16, 2008 8:29 am
ME TOOO
Comment by cutiepie: Sep 30, 2008 10:25 am
i like all your poems little brother he he he, miss u too, keep writing i want to hear more.
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