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Just a name

It was a small crowd
not lots of people,
But i saw her their
from my perch on the steeple,
She looked up
and saw that i stared,
she couldnt help but notice that I looked like I cared,
She turned and
walked to her car,
I flew down to meet her
since i was a scar,
she new i was there
as I landed behind her,
not looking back she asked
"Who are you monsieur?"
"Im an angel fallen.",
"Your name madame?"
she replied "Simply Hollen.",
then she got in her car
and with perfect aim,
She shot me a smile
and left me with just a name.
Hollen



by preppykiller
posted on 12/31/1969

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Comment by romil: Jan 9, 2007 9:57 am
amazing poem...i love it...esp. the ending...read mine too!
Comment by tearsofrain: Jan 9, 2007 1:50 pm
that is a great poem! it started off sorta strnagly... but im really glad i keppt reading. its beautiful. great wording and such.
Comment by dyslexicparanoia: Jan 10, 2007 10:22 am
nice
Comment by NIKKIx: Jan 14, 2007 9:02 pm
Awe thats cute! i love it!
Comment by BrokenLittleGirl: Mar 11, 2007 2:34 am
great poem...i like it
Comment by BrokenLittleGirl: Mar 31, 2007 11:59 pm
i like it.
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